Someone read my ucas statement?

You should never post your personal statement on internet. Because UCAS has detecion programme when they're checking your application, they might find your personal statement on internet and ume that it's not yours and so you copied it from someone else's. Then you would have to tell them it's yours and you posted it so that people can point out mistakes if there are any, etc && you should show your personal statement to your tutor or teacher, not us.